Edits
Am I gaining? I thought I was, having brought Far Arena Chapter 12 down from 9323 words to below 8000 - until I looked back at the original wordcount and realised I'd only lost about 700 words net, having put in a big chunk of Erien explaining Reetion inquiries to his mystified and reluctant audience. So that is not the 25% decrease I was aiming for. I think Chapter 14 is going to have to take a considerable hit; at 14K plus words, it's up with Chapter 10 as "The Chapter That Ate Toronto". However, I have dumped 12C in the depot, and consider it, for the time being, done.
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