Done some more, through to swearing, and uploaded. Hope this doesn't collide with your edits of previous version. Expecting you will accept or reject all edits at will, and upload again to me named for date, retiring the old version to previous. (Don't protocols sound bossy when you articulate them?

Anyhow, I think that's just what we've agreed on generally. If not, remind me. I've started using comments to annotate some revisions I wanted to waffle on or explain my reasoning for. I'll try to keep that to a minimum.) Home today on a holiday. Taking a break now and will be back at Chapter 21 after.

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