Chapter 21
Is up for you to review, Alison. Arena21jun23.rtf Particularly interested in what you think of the use of Di Mon's knife as the means of setting up the remaining conflict over Di Mon. I like the way you developed the idea of the knife as symbolic of Erien's bond and unresolved issues with Di Mon. If we've edited it out in last past, I think we could justify putting it back in, in the last one.
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