Far Arena Chapter 01
Uploaded lastest version to repository. Realized when I did it that I couldn't tell from the file name whether you'd taken a look and edited yet or not. Guess we should stick to
the idea of appending our initials to the date in the name when we check or edit something. Using David as my "acid test" for whether description or backgrounders are bogging down action. Often he liked the material cut but had lost track of the thread of the action. Keeping in mind the target length and that we'll need to cut throughout, I am working on a "cut first" strategy for shortening. Not comfortable until you've had a look and given the nod, though.

Work
Sorry to hear things are uncomortably busy.Hope the weekend is restorative.


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