Monday, July 29, 2002
Chapter 2 reviewed
Fixed a continuity glitch: do you realise Erien stepped out of the elevator twice? He's too compulsive for us to do that to him! He'd never recover from the embarrassment. Cut a couple more sentences, and realised we probably should excise faux pas as a non-ORU-ism; likewise basket-case. My eyes are too much of a distraction for me to come up with some suitable phrasing. If I read this at ConVersion, I'm going to do a light edit and remove some of the details so as to avoid spoilers for people who have not read TP - aside from the rather big spoiler, I suppose, that they neither come to a bad end nor get all their problems neatly solved.

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