Friday, August 02, 2002
Far Arena, final chapter
Deadlines are very useful for spurring one on to work ... on other things. The final chapter condensed on my way into work - I don't think I'm more than 2-3 pages off the end, plus the revision required throughout to get the threads leading up to the end woven through the story, so that final scene belongs to the story and has the emotional impact it should have. I can do more in the earlier chapters with the circumstances under which Erien came to Rire in the first place. See what you think - it's uploaded as Arena22 and today's date. And if you have any inspirations re: the ending, go ahead ...

What, you've never seen a phage before? Neatly sinister little apparatus, isn't it!

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