Saturday, September 07, 2002
Far Arena: missed opportunities
Does Ann know who Dorn is? The idea of using Erien as a hostage comes to mind easily enough, but using Dorn isn't mentioned. Either she shouldn't know who Dorn is - since Erien judiciously does not give her a full name - or her scruples about using him while he's down should be made more evident.

(Added later) Rereading 8, maybe she shouldn't know until she's confronted by Horth and Bryllit and Erien tells him - they're Dorn's parents.

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