Finally completed my pass through chapter 10, Far Arena. Sorry it took me so long! I've heard from Richard at Edge, also, about Second Contact. Looks like we have a plan for tackling changes there. I'll alternate between, I think. Don't think it is fair or even necessarily productive for me to grind to a halt on Far Arena. My original hope was to do the re-writes on Second Contact during the summer but the best laid plans of ... etc. :-) Maybe I'll be able to to it over Xmas. Seems like I did a lot of editing in Chapter 10 FA but I hope most of it was tightening and straightening lines of force. Still concerned re: clarity around Kali Station arbiter vs. visitor probe arbiter with regard to the threat of Fahzir downloading info, but probably too close to it to judge. Your turn. Cheers.
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