I've got through Chapter 11 - easy. Chapter 10 I'm having to shoehorn in another scene: a while back I realised that although Erien said he would go and tell the Reetions they would be leaving, he never did. So he's doing that now, and trying to make himself calculatedly obnoxious on the grounds that if he gets them mad enough, they'll come through it better than if they're simply scared. Trouble is, he's not very good at making people mad at him deliberately; he's much better at doing it inadvertently; I'll have to work on him. That chapter is still loooong, though - before I began shoehorning, I clocked it at 14 150 words.
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